"There is one overarching compelling attribute of this paper. Namely, it summarises in one condensed explication a 35-year programme of research..."
"The paper should also include a better justification for focusing on deaths among single women. Aside from the fact that such data
are scarce, why should the reader care about this subject?..."
"In the discussion... it would be beneficial if the author differentiated between institutions and individuals. This is important...
in that it is not acceptable... for an institution, say a hospital, to be a conscientious objector."
"To condemn an entire programme based on the experiences with one of the many contraceptive options available weakens the argument."